What is 100WCGU? Each week there is a prompt: a few connected words, a selection of individual words or a picture. You have 100 words in order to write a creative piece.
This week’s prompt is: (see this week’s prompt site by clicking here) … as the apple fell…
Michelangelo_AdamandEve_SistineChapel
Many an Apple Fell
… as the apple fell….
In this case plucked down from the tree.
The snake crawled. Adam bit Eve’s entreaty.
….the apple fell….
On Newton while he sipped his tea,
A bump rose grave, and named it grav-i-tea
….the apple….
Split sunder from an arrow’s swell,
Off the fruitful head of L’il William Tell
….the apple which….
The witch’s spell did soon dismiss
Snow White, whose lips would bear a princely kiss
…and apples fell….
“For I have had too much,” wrote Frost.
“Ten thousand fruit were touched…” and some were lost
And I am done with apple felling now.
Randy Mazie
good one Randy. I say this with full grav-i-tea. This reminded me about one I wrote a while ago about sharing an apple:
I just read it. Very sensual.
I liked…
“…sweet juices, inside, liberated by
lip, and tongue, scent
we consume it as we would consume each other…
…and suck the nectar
across our tongues and chew…
…I gaze at you and judge your hunger”
thanks Randy, for letting me put the link in.
😉 nice piece
Very nice work, and you have really highlighted how important a symbol apples are.
Thanks. I took the liberty of visiting your “Repair Job” and left some of my questions there for you. I am “AP-PALLED” by what happened (OK “ap-palled” is a stretch for a play on words for apple but it’s still very early in the day). 😉 Randy
That was great – a really well rounded take on the prompt. Very clever.
Please come around more often. You have and I have similar tastes – at least concerning fallen apples. Randy
Adam bit Eve’s entreaty? Wow, I didn’t know that ! I once had a woman who bit my…. It still hurts when I think about it. Oh yeah, liked your take. But then, if I didn’t, I wouldn’t be here!
Wait, Paul, did I mispell entitty?
…no, I’m sure I spelled it write. How many hits will I get on this post for muspelling today? How did you finally make out? Make out? Hitting on? That’s what Adam was doing with Eve’s entreaty – bit by bit, or was it bite by bite? Those were some apples, no?
OK, I don’t like you anymore! I tried to be nice. Tried to pay you a compliment. I bet you were a bully as a kid. Or maybe you were bullied! So I’ve decided I’m not going to follow you anymore. We’ll just call it stalking. I’m going to stalk you.Oh and yes, Eve had some great apples!
Ha. Temper, Paul, temper.
Bully? As Lincoln wrote, “I wish to be neither master nor slave.” I have enough trouble managing my own life – much less my words (and perish – my thoughts or actions).
And yes, oh my, we share the same tastes in apples. Eve had some gorgeous apples.
Please reconsider not following me. Lead if you will, but let’s stay friends at least.
I’ve changed my name to Jack so we could be Jack and the (bean) stalk-er… (pa dum dum)
Thanks for this journey through the Apple’s greatest moments in history!
Great one Randy. I love writing prompts.
thanks. Why don’t you join us? I’ll lend you my Apple. Randy
I actually participate in writing challenges on other sites. My blog has a particular theme so challenges don’t always jive with that. I do enjoy reading yours though.
Thank you.
Would you be able/willing to share what sites those might be?
Nicley done Randy. I like the way you wove in the famous apple episodes! 😀
Thanks. Well you know an apple a day…. Randy
I enjoyed this. Can’t think of any famous apples that got missed out – great job!
Thanks. Care for some apple pie? Randy
Clever. Forgot how significant the apple is in history and culture!
evocative…your historical travels with the amazing apple startled me. very creative and clever. Thanks for posting!
I do like your apple-ication of this week’s prompt.
YEEEEEESSSSS!!!! GOOD ONE! 😉 😉 😉
That is a well appl-eyed noun. Thanks. I love it. Randy
Cleverly done! Like the other comments, I enjoyed your use of famous apples. It put a smile on my face.
thank you. Come again soon. Have a little cider maybe.
I love the multiple, literary uses of apples. I never really thought about the metaphor that surrounds them, but now I am intrigued.
They are fruits of passion, wisdom, challenge, temptation, sweetness and life.
ee cummings might have re-posed the word as appl-icious; the world is appl-icious.
Thanks for coming by. Hope to see you comment again soon. Randy
There goes my idea. Already been done! And better than anything I could come up with. Hmmmm
wanna borrow. Trade ya for an apple. Randy 😉
Sounds like a good deal! Haha
Clever take on the prompt.
Great piece! Made me think, made me laugh, made me wish I’d had the idea! I wouldn’t have done it so well though, so glad I didn’t! Brilliant take on the prompt.
Thank you so much.