The Sunday Whirl invites writers to write a poem or short prose using some or all of the “wordle’s” 12 words. This week it is:
Love the internal rhyme here, and all those fantastic strong verbs. 🙂
Please come again!
and you, too. Please.
The rhythm within, the tension, the subtle tones I can hear – I like this poem very much. Thanks for sharing it.
with pleasure… randy
This poem has a great beat about it. Renewal what a strange word for modern man where destruction is his bedfellow.
such dark words, oldegg. Where there is yin, there’s also yang.
nicely done I especially like the first two stanzas
Stop where you like. It’s the American way. Randy
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I love how this is pared down…fine but strong as a spiders web…
I like Pares. I’ve never been to France.
Sorry, but I’ll have to keep it quick today.
Thanks for your kind comments on this web. Randy
Nice one! Warmed me right up.
warm is good.