Loving You: Sunday Whirl “wordle”

That first kiss, that first love, that first time…

The Sunday Whirl blog invites writers to write a poem or short prose using some or all of the “wordle’s” 12 word.

This week’s words are:

Loving You

The first ride
is blessed,
deserves wings; the soft pant
of which lies alongside the slaps and gasps;
where the snare of a blue instant
implodes love and life into
an exquisite unbalance;
yields everything that was,
everything that was thought to come,
just for today,
into sweet sublime dust.

Randy Mazie


10 thoughts on “Loving You: Sunday Whirl “wordle”

    • Give me a few minutes to think about your statement in the past tense and I will try to figure out if your statement is better now as I think about it, then it was when I read it.

      My point (if I had one) is that each moment is experienced (first, everything in-between, and last) when it exists, in its fullest, and there is only that moment.

      Now let us light some incense, breathing the eternal smells, and chant.

      Randy 😉

    • I agree with you a thousand times over … of course, it makes sense.
      And each moment is to be experienced as if it were the first time – because it is the first time for this moment.
      To be repeated a thousand times over 😉

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