She was the girl of my dreams – at least of my picture frame: VisDare

She was as pretty as a painting. A real classical oil on canvas girl. But she told me she was framed….

VisDare at Anonymous Legacy – 150 word story to accompany the visual prompt:

She was the girl of my dreams – at least of my picture frame

The day she “came out” I thought I died.

She stepped out of the frame so unexpectedly. My heart leaped into my throat. I gulped, and it hurt terribly. I remember thinking I’d better take an antacid quickly because this acid reflux was gonna burn real bad.

Next thing I know I’m on the ground. She’s patting my hand and calling me “sweet thing”. Her breath is warm in my ear as she whispers to me to come back to her. She knows how much I’ve admired her all these years. She no longer could contain her affections. So I had better not die. Besides, she said something about having sold something to someone to come to me.

This was the first time that I ever felt that I could die happy from a woman’s attentions without having any carnal knowledge of her. She slapped my face hard and complained, “Not if I can help it.”

Randy Mazie


16 thoughts on “She was the girl of my dreams – at least of my picture frame: VisDare

  1. I’m sorry I’ve been quiet, lately. I always enjoy the flow of your stories. They’ve a charming cadence that reads very simply, yet evokes plenty of humor and emotion. That slap and last sentence made me grin!

  2. O my! Why do I suspect that this won’t end well? I agree with the others…this is a creepy little piece — in entirely a good way! Sometimes the thing you wish for is the one thing you should never have…!

    Thanks for another great VisDare!!

  3. This is probably a totally meaningless comment, but you reminded me of a song… I was at the strip mall and this guy was playing for dimes, singing about, ♪ my sweet thing, i would give her everything ♫ It was one of those haunting blues progressions I love but I can’t play guitar. Anyway, the lyrics said stuff like he would lay right down and die for her. I’ve never been able to find the song on YouTube… 100 others but not that one. Love the picture. ♥

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